That you'd played more with the patterns in the little eel guys. And that you hadn't sped up the song. "Electric Feel" is one of my favorite all-time songs. Hated to see it so fast. Looks good though! Keep it up!
Love that font too. What is it? Handmade?
the font is chinese rocks i think.
At best I can say it was a good start. Keep animating, but don't expect to get any respect from animations like that. If you like working in b&w, try some shading, some environments, anything to add to it. I say that because just saying you like working in b&w line work makes you look lazy, unless you can pull it off. You can't yet. I'd drop the anime style. It makes you look 13. Find a style of your own. You'll be so much happier you did.
By no means stop animating. If you're 13 and posting on NG already, think about how much better you'll be at 17 and 21 and so on. Don't get down on yourself, but be sure to take the constructive criticism you're being provided. Good luck and keep working!
Thank you for your honesty and giving out advice ^_^
Fantastic environments! I can't get over your animation! Looks amazing, but maybe a different song would've been good.
The only thing I can see that should be looked at for possible improvemtnes is the voice overs. They're not very clear. Other than that, what fantastic animations! Very well done, I look forward to more.
You seriously need to use vectors. Enlarged bitmaps are nasty. Don't do it.
I can't explain it...
...but I just find this submission to be completely hysterical. Well done.
Buddy, you are fucked up...nice flash though.
Seriously guys, this is a really solid Flash. Just some feedback to help you improve in the future though - there should be a skip button for everything. The icons got kinda confusing on the remote, and I watched a few of them twice because I clicked the wrong one (back vision, I know it was my bad). But I think it'd be nice if there'd been a skip button. On a more positive note, I really enjoyed the submission - great audio, and overall very well done!
Of course it's great, it's yours.
Very 1984-esque. I like what you're saying.
I think the best part was the shot that you clearly spent a lot of time on, after all the nails were shot through the protagonist, where everything was shaded so perfectly. It's briliant, of course. Very, very, very well done.
As usual, I applaud you.
I'll give it a 9.
Not your best, in my opinion, but still fantastic. I like your dry sense of humor. You definately made a statement with this.
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